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[ibne sultan narvi]

-----------------------GHAZAL-------------------------------
Be samar ham tere dar se gaey
Hein zida magar dil jigar se gaey
Ishq ki maey kar gaee kaam apna
Ek ghont mein behr-o-barr se gaey
Chaman mein baney ga aab ashiana
Aarzo ley kar ye ghar se gaey
Talash-e-jana mein katee umar saree
Tujhe he paya ham jidhar se gaey
Guzar tera tha ya jhonka saba ka
Deewane howey rah guzar se gaey
Utar jaey dil mein shokhi-e-nazar
Tujhe dekh kar us nazar se gaey
Ek rona he tha faqtt kaam apna
Bahe aanso itne deeda varr se gaey
Dil aakhir dil hey sang-e-rah nahein
Ek thokar mein udhar idhar se gaey
Too he mila na Kaabey ka rasta
Ho ke nashad tere shahar se gaey
Baaz raho ATHAR ishq ke safar se
Pukarein gey logg Majno jidhar se gaey

-------------(KALAAM ,ATHAR NARVI )
-----(DR ATHAR HUSSAIN SIDDIQUI AL MAROOF IBNE SULTAN NARVI)

----(YA ELLAHI MUJHE ACHHI BAT KEHNEY KA ACHHA SALIQA DEDEY AAMEEN)
-----E-mail:- atharnarvi@yahoo.com

[roselin]

Nice poem, thanks!

[ibne sultan narvi]

Thanks Roselin and Aryan keep it

[huma]

Very nice. You chose great and very romantic Words, i like it.

[ibne sultan narvi]

Thanks Huma jee

[Anthony696]

This is really very Ghazal which is written very well with great words, A Ghazal may be understood as a poetic expression of both the pain of loss or separation and the beauty of love in spite of that pain. This Ghazal is showing both the things in a single Ghazal. In India there are very famous Ghazal singers which are really good and have a list of many Ghazals which still remembered by the music industry. Jagit Singh, Roop Kumar Rathod, pankaj Udas and Fateh ali Khan are well known and very reputed Ghazal singers in India. Before couple of days Jagjit Sahab passed away but we have their loving Ghazals which keep him always with us.